5 Screenwriting Mistakes That Kill Adaptations (And How to Fix Them)

Struggling to adapt your novel into a screenplay? This free guide reveals the five biggest mistakes writers make — and how to avoid them from page one.

What You’ll Learn:

  • Mistake 1: Keeping Too Much of the Novel

  • Mistake 2: Overusing Internal Monologue

  • Mistake 3: Ignoring Screenplay Structure

  • Mistake 4: Writing “Literary” Dialogue

  • Mistake 5: Forgetting the Visual Medium

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Five Screenwriting Mistakes

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